Changes and re-shoots

What I need to change:

I need to re-record my radio advert because some of the sentences which I put in, are irrelevant and should not be in the advert. I also need to change the ending part (the second speaker) - I need her to come in more boldly, so that it is evident the voice has changed. I also need the female speaker to talk directly to the audience to make them feel more included. I then am going to add my male (first) speaker to the ending of the advert to end it in a positive note.

I also need to re-shoot some of my sponsorship sequence. This is because some of the footage needs to be changed e.g. the pan, and long shots. 

What I need to do (this week)

Re-shoot

Shoot my first half of main advert